Joint custody – HAIKU

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Sun and moon divorced

Stars suffer joint custody

Await an eclipse




11 thoughts on “Joint custody – HAIKU

  1. Thank you!
    Divorced because we perceive the sun as belonging to the day and associate the moon with the night.
    The lunar eclipse forces the duo to be opposite to each other (face each other, in the context of the poem). The solar eclipse can occur only if the moon passes between the sun and the earth. The star children long for their parents to interact.
    Yours is a great interpretation. Thanks again for your interest 🙂

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