Blessed rain,
I sense you as
your throbs become
the marching band
to my writing
My letters come to
a standstill
for my pen is perennial
but you are the muse
Rain,
you versatile liquid,
A farmer’s prayer,
the golden harvest
A child’s answer,
the school holiday
I look up
from my study desk
you turn time for me
I recall our past
from paper boat contests
to swaying to your
alluring whistle
When you drench my soul
my stains are purged
I’m fresh white paper
waiting to be written in
once again
I see passersby
shooting umbrella shields
shunning your drizzle pecks
scuttling for shelter
away from You,
Life bringer
Worry not, old friend
My door is unlatched
my racing feet
splash puddles
eager to welcome you
I gaze upwards fondly
Your recognition’s instant
you gather pace
In a longing embrace
I open my arms wide
Diamond droplets
spill into my soul
Update: I just got notified that this was my hundredth post. I’m happy beyond words to thank everyone for the unbelievable support and for taking the time to read, like, comment and/or follow. The WordPress community has been beyond kind to me and I didn’t think I’d get here when I started. I sincerely respect and salute every blogger here, for consciously breathing life into art. Thank you!
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Beautiful and encouraging😊, I have written one of my peoms like this too👌👌
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Thank you so much! 💯 Good luck to you 🙂
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You celebrated with perfect ode, your century of post… Very well penned
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Thank you so very much 🙂
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Where I live it’s rained for days and days. This is appropriate.
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Hahaa thank you for sharing that. Have a fabulous week.
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So very beautiful!!!
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Many thanks to you for those lovely words. Happy blogging!
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Very Poetic Imagery of Rain.
So beautifully written and expressive.
Yonnie💜
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Hello Yonnie. It is always good to hear from you. Thank you very much for those lovely words ♥️
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The feeling is mutual! It is indeed a pleasure always! You are welcome!
InHisCare💜
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😊💛
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“When you drench my soul
my stains are purged
I’m fresh white paper
waiting to be written in
once again” these lines just stood out to be, they are a poem all by themselves.
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That’s very kind of you to say. Thanks a ton for sharing those generous thoughts. Have a blessed day ahead.
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I remembered partly my childhood. I miss rain more I grow up. It seems only a child can feel rain, can talk to it. More we grow up, more natural senses we lose to adapt.
Really a good one. Thanks.
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I definitely have a better appreciation for rain now. Your poignant words really had me thinking. I hope we can use this awareness to reconnect with and relish nature.
Thank you so very much for writing here.
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The Pleasure is mine
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Nice
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Thank you for sharing that!
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Congratulations every milestone is an encouragement to go on 💕
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Thanks a lot for your support! Good luck with your wonderful blog.
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Thanks dear
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Beautiful poem!!
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Thank you so much! Glad to hear that.
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What a wonderful post to celebrate your 100th, congratulations!
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Thank you so much. That’s incredibly sweet! Have a great day.
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Wow……100th post! Amazing has been the journey…. Keep pouring like rain spreading joy!
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Thank you so, so much for being on the journey and being incredibly supportive. I really appreciate the metaphor 🙏
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Again breathtaking
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Thank you for your precious words! I cherish them. Good luck with your blog.
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Beautifully written, beautiful images .. Like, ” my reaching feet splash puddles.. “!!!
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Thanks a lot for that epic comment. I’m so happy you liked the images. I appreciate you sharing that. Have a great day!
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Reminds me of my childhood days, but I hated thunderstorms. They frightened the hell out of my little self.
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Haha that’s so relatable. I’m happy that it took you back in time. Many thanks for writing here.
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A very beautiful poem about rain.
Congratulations on it being your 100th post.
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Thank you so very much for your delightful comment! I sincerely appreciate it.
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Simply wonderful! Happy New Year
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Thanks a lot. I’m flattered! Have a marvellous 2019.
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I hope this kind of writing spills into my soul 😀
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That’s very sweet of you. Thank you for your lovely comment! It made me smile 😀
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😀 😀
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Hi Congrats on your hundredth outing here…Keep them coming…Like the rain in time which sustains us all…
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Hello. Thanks a million for journeying along with me for all the 100! I really appreciate the benevolent metaphor. Take care.
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“from paper boat contests
to swaying to your
alluring whistle”
You said Everything in this poem. So beautiful
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Many, many thanks to you for your wonderful words and taking the time to leave them with me. Rain certainly evokes exciting memories! ☔
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And the petrichor
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Ah, the petrichor. It’s one of my favourite words.
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No doubt. Have a good day
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Thank you. Happy blogging!
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The Haunting sounds, feel, and mood seem to, like rain, drip from your pen!
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How poetic and incredibly generous of you! Thank you for your heart warming words. I’m grateful that you could perceive it in your mind’s eye.
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Your reply brought a tears to my eyes!
How generous of you!
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I certainly felt emotional writing back. Glad that it stirred something within you as well.
Have a lovely week ahead!
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