I wait at a bus stop
in summer clothes
My watch has stopped
Looking into the passengers
takes me back to an
adolescent time
blank-slated identities
I wonder if
their purses hold answers
to questions of the future
Intention is ridiculed
I need to buy a ticket
to know where I’m going
Copyright ยฉ Roshni Ramanan
Explanation: The poet is in a state of inertia, which she likens to an adolescent state of uncertainty. Time has come to a standstill in the frozen present but comes alive in the past. She is curious as to whether her fellow passengers have successfully resolved their identity crises. Her summer clothes beam of hidden hope for the future. She intends for Action to precede Intention, which is self contradicting. Her destination will be dictated by the ticket she buys, for which she will have to break free from her inertia.
I really like that you posted an explanation. Sometimes, I really like a poem but I want to know the explanation behind it. Your explanation teaches me to see deeper into the poem so that I can find the truer jewel down below. Thanks so much.
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I was advised by a reader to do so. Thanks for reading and writing here, Mary โบ๏ธ
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Don’t we all go through this! Amazingโบ๏ธ
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Glad you can relate, Ramyani. Thanks a lot ๐
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i so love your metaphors
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Oh thank you so much, Gina. That’s very sweet of you!
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my pleasure, it was wonderful
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Thanks again, good luck with your blog!
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I’m still waiting !!
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Join the club. Thanks a bunch for dropping by! Have fun blogging ๐
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Thank you for the membership of club lol !!
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Hahaaa I appreciate that!
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I wish I’d knew the answer too ๐
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Haha don’t we all ๐ It’s less thrilling that way, though. Thanks a ton for writing here!
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