The picketing fence of
your scepticism can’t stop
the clandestine rendezvous
of my mind and feeling
As I inscribe, I unleash
on all my readers
who are free
to take my chameleon words
and colour them
with the shade of
their tinted glasses
I’m unburdened by
the absence of meaning
that has left me
The reader follows
the hint of a forgotten trail
Carves a fresh path
making meaning
Copyright Β© Roshni Ramanan
Dedicated to my readers. Have a fantabulous day! π
I love the depth in the poem.It allowed me to sink in.
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So glad you did. Thanks a lot! Happy blogging to you.
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We each have our own take on poetry. You’ve captured that nicely in your poem.
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Agreed. Thanks a lot for your generous thoughts. I believe in offering room for interpretation, so that the poem is built further by a reader-centred understanding.
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Good one Roshni π
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Thanks a bunch, Ashok π
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Pleasure Roshni
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An inspiring and open piece, one expects there is more to come π
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Those words mean a lot to me. Thank you very much for visiting and writing here.
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Gorgeous write! So many meanings – in the absence of meaning. π
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You couldn’t have said it better. Happy, happy blogging, my friend.
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As writers, may we always leave a hint of where the trail is. Then our readers can discover the joy of finding hidden treasure.
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Beautifully said. The reader makes the poem, as much as the writer does. Thank you for writing here. Have fun blogging βΊοΈ
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Have a fantabulous day as well!
Great poem! It was beautiful. Loved the meaning.
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You made my day!
So glad you did.
Thank you so much, Robin βΊοΈ Good luck.
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Iβm glad I made your day!
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A refection of or a morrow image of clever writing can complete a poem…! But knowing that your best work only comes from instinct makes you a worthy wordsmith. This I see in some of your work, but your problem is that you don’t carricterise in the formal workings of your poetry. This is not meant as a criticism, but I hope a hint that your work needs a sense of structure in its direction only. Yours M.L.Behan
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Good observation. I pretty much wrote this one with a stream of consciousness style and didn’t structure it prior.
Thanks a ton for your feedback, Behan. Happy blogging πβΊοΈ
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No problem keep up the good work π
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Love your chameleon words. I shall colour them with a rainbow, sometimes gold sometimes darkest night but always who we are.
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How poetic! Love that your interpretation is always true to who you are. Thank you so very much for writing here.
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Another clever peace of writing yours M.L.Behan. jeep up thΓ© fois work living tour content.
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Glad you think so. Thanks a ton. Good luck!
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Beautiful! I love this!
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How kind of you! Thank you so much, Charlotte βΊοΈ Have a blessed day ahead.
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Very nice…
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Thanks a bunch, Ushnish
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You’re welcome Roshni ππ
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Meaning often deserts us! Enjoyed this Roshni. π
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It does and that’s a joyous relief, when we successfully put our thoughts on paper. Thank you so very much, Punam π
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So it is. A pleasure to read your words. π
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Reblogged this on Hamed M. Dehongi.
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I’m truly humbled! Thanks a bunch for the kind gesture, Hamed π
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Nothing to mention. Your post is great.
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Thanks again βΊοΈ Have a great day.
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