Sidlak: A five line poem composed of 3-5-7-9 syllables and the last line (without restrictions on syllables) indicates a colour that sums up the authors’ feelings and the spirit of the poem.
Intricate
webs folded within
delicate exterior
Who knew you were such an enigma?
Rose
Copyright © Roshni Ramanan
Nice. Good approach Here!!!
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Thank you very much. Glad you liked it! Have a good day.
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You are welcome 😊
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Always a pleasure but I mistakenly put my commentary here. It was for the other one “Grey”.😅
Apologize for the glitch..😊💙
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Hahaaa thanks anyway. Happy Sunday.
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Indeed hope comes in fringes and what a way to put it out in words..💙
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Delighted to receive your poetic comment, Samyak. Happy reading and happy blogging 👍
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Beautifully written!
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That’s sweetof you. Thanks a bunch, Srishti!
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Nice one
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Thanks a bunch for writing here!
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Thanks for introducing sidlak poem…. Its beautiful
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Thank you! Happy you discovered it here ☺️
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Beautiful piece! Love the Sidlak form too, I’ve never heard of. I’ll certainly give it a try.
p.s. Thank you for visiting my blog, now I’ve found yours too. 🙂
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Good luck with it, Khaya. Thanks for the compliment. I appreciate you visiting 😀
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Beautiful poem!
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Thank you, Michelle!
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I really enjoyed reading this– a treat at the end of the day. And funny coincidence, I’m also posting a rose poem Fri Am– I guess June and smalling roses are on our minds.
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Oh nice. Good luck. I look forward to reading that. Thanks a ton!
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Sorry I haven’t been around for a while. Life makes me tired sometimes. Lol
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Oh I totally understand. Hope you’re doing well now. It’s great to have you back here 😀
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Great writing!
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That’s a high compliment. Many thanks!
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Abundant
Brings tranquility
To mind and body alike
Life would be different without you
Plants
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Love this Sidlak. I’m a fellow plant lover. Thanks for sharing!
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Thank you for sharing as well. I enjoyed yours too.
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Thanks, KJ! Appreciate it 👍
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Wow, so beautiful!
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Oh, thank you so much, sweet Nameera!
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Beautiful.
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Hey, Mary! Long time no hear. Thanks a lot 💜
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Beautifully crafted
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How kind of you. Thanks, Mathew!
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Beautiful sidlak Roshni.
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Thank you so very much for your lovely words. Have a pleasant evening.
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