Sidlak#3
Sidlak: A five line poem composed of 3-5-7-9 syllables and the last line (without restrictions on syllables) indicates a colour that sums up the authors’ feelings and the spirit of the poem.
The moon’s welts
reflect a beaten
broken world of hapless sins
Yet there’s hope- hints of white glint amidst
the grey globe of today
Copyright © Roshni Ramanan
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Wonderful to focus on the glinting hope in the gray! 🙂
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True. Thank you for writing here. Have a blessed day!
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Wonderful poetry 🔆
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Thanks a lot, Melanie. Happy blogging 🤗
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I’m grateful Roshni
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Excellent
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Thanks a lot, Ujjwal. Good luck with your blog!
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Beautiful and true words of the color grey. 👍👍👍👍
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Thank you so much. I am very grateful you took the time to read and write! Have a phenomenal day : D
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Welcome always.🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
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Good one about hope and Moon..Though the moon has no light of its own and reflects only the sun light how well it guides us in the night..This to me is the epitome of fullest expression under limitation..
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Wow. What a poignant thought. Thanks a ton for sharing that!
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this form is totally new to me, beautifully written by you, so on point
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Glad you discovered it here. So happy to receive your kind words. Thank you very much!
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my pleasure, totally!
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Beautiful!
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Thank you! So glad to have you back. Hope your fever has subsided.
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My pleasure, Roshni! Thank you so much. Yes, I have recovered completely.
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Good to know. Take care 😀
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