Wash the weight off of me,
drench my fears,
drown my inadequacies,
dampen any hatred,
sink every self-doubt,
soak my reservations,
swamp any negative intent,
submerge the bundles of pain,
flush away all falsehood,
rinse stains of my sins away.
Trickle in sweet smiles,
spray me with playfulness,
swim with abandon into my soul,
shower me with content,
bathe me in light,
rain in abundance,
flood hope into my heart,
stream joy into my being,
splash me with a dash of wonder,
immerse me in your fluid dance,
as I plunge into new adventures,
Let’s sail together, an alien cruise.
Drink to
waves of versatility
springs of satedness
puddles of patient progress
fountains of incisive intellect
creeks of creativity
brooks of buoyancy
ponds of treasured ideas
lakes of loving-kindness
rivers of resplendence
seas and oceans of serendipity.
Dear water,
With a drop of your luck,
a dribble of my hard work,
I’ll paddle through hell,
the way I wade through heaven.
Copyright © Roshni Ramanan
Amazing post
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Thank you, Shivi!
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My pleasure 😁
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Thank you!
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Very nice 👍
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Thank you so much 😀
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A novel tribute to water!
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It is a joy to read you. Thank you for your comment, take care!
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You are welcome, Roshni.
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Such a wonderful poem, it was so refreshing. Thanks for the post.
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Thanks a lot, Geri. Have a good one!
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Beautifully written !!!
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Thank you so much, Anurag. Welcome to my blog 😄
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It’s my pleasure roshni 😊
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💦 💧 water the elixir of our life 💦💧..nice lines 👍🏻
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Hello Anu, appreciate you writing here. Thanks, good luck 🍀
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Beautifully penned ♥️
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Thanks a ton, Akshita. Happy weekend 🎉
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My pleasure 💐
Same to you🌹
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Beautiful poem 👍
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Thank you, Satyen! Happy reading, and happy writing 🙂
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Beautifully written….
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Thank you so much, Nabeela.
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So beautiful
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Thank you so much. Good luck!
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You’re welcome
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Beautiful lines Roshni 🙂
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Thank you, Nima! I appreciate you taking the time to write here.
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You are always welcome Roshni… and I remember you so well. You were the first one who read my first post here. And you were the first one who commented on one of my early poems 🙂
I owe you 🙂 🙂
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Oh? I’m so glad to have done that, Nima.
Sometimes, amazing bloggers get overlooked because they don’t have the numbers, so they aren’t propelled forward by the platform. We all need to take it upon ourselves to not let that happen.
You owe me nothing btw. I’m sure you deserved the like and comment 😃 Glad that you’re thriving on WordPress. Have an amazing journey ahead! 💯
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I agree that dear.. people get fooled by numbers.. and thank you for the support you gave me during my initial days 🙂 You too… have a great life blogging 🙂 More love to you ❤
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True. Of course.
Stay safe and keep writing.
Love and giant hugs❤🤩
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You too Roshni .. Stay safe and healthy ❤
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As refreshing as a splash of fresh water… brilliant work…
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Thanks a bunch, that’s very generous! I really appreciate the metaphor. Happy reading on WordPress 😃
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Looking forward to more like this… thanks
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❤
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Beautiful poem on Water.
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Thank you so much. I’m touched. Have an absolutely fabulous time, blogging ⭐
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You are welcome Roshni.
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Fantastic Roshni water indeed is divine
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Thanks a lot! Good luck 🍀
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Lovely to find this in my mailbox. Thank you.
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I’m very grateful that you did. Appreciate you writing here. Thanks, Elaine. Have a blessed day!💕
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One of the most beautiful poems i’ve read. The artistry of the word use is stunning. Thank you.
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How magnanimous of you. Thank you so much for those heartwarming words!
Have a fabulous time blogging, my friend.
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Exceptional poem.
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Thank you so very much. You made my day. Happy blogging, stay wonderful 😍
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My pleasure. Happy blogging to you too. Stay inspired and inspire us.
xoxoxo
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Awww thanks again, you melt my heart 💖🤗
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❤️❤️❤️
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