An old poem I’d scribbled in a notebook from years ago:
Your eyes set, chin determined
You wrangle to break away
But the chains don’t come off
For it is my soul you’ve in a stranglehold
Still a soldier, different this time
The arms you take up are in self-defence
You rip my pleas apart, puncture my trembling heart
Cut me again, again- to ascertain
you can still make me bleed
Every drop I spill is your elixir of strength
Your armour thickens
Your eyes bless me no more
They smoke and spew hatred
I can’t inhale, I can’t escape
A furious Greek God punitive
You become human once again.
Copyright © Roshni Ramanan
This is about idealising someone only to realise with time that they’re as fallible as anyone, if you’re done benefiting them or you get on their wrong side.
Nice one 💖
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Thanks, Pragya ❤ Have a good one!
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Brilliant piece! It is worth reading! BTW, thanks for sharing!
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Thanks a ton, Leif!
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It’s beautiful and deep indeed
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Thank you so much for writing here!
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This is such a beautiful poem.
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Thanks, Shruti. Take care ⭐
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Awww, simply thank you👏👏
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You’re welcome. Appreciate you writing here. Happy blogging!
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Good that you brought it to light because it is magnificent. Good weekend for you and your verses.
Manuel
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Thank you for those heartwarming words. I’m humbled. A fabulous weekend to you, as well!
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You are welcome
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Great lines Roshini, needed no explanation really, speaks volumes.
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I’m so glad it spoke to you. Thank you so much! Hope you’re safe. Take care.
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Very safe, I hope you are too – and – you’re very welcome.
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I am 😄😄
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🙂
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Beautifully inscribed 😊
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Thanks a ton, Sangeeta! Good luck 😄☀
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Wishing that everyone realize this truth before it us too much to handle !!
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True. I wish I’d been told. For me, it’s second nature to look up to people but having an element of worship is different from entirely putting someone up on a pedestal.
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Yes Roshni 😊
I think it is similar to the this one I wrote last year .. do read
https://thetenthzodiac.wordpress.com/2019/04/03/inspiration-and-imitation-my-thoughts/
This is the link 😊
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I sure will 💯
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Thank you 😊
I would like to know your comments on it 😊
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Off the top of my head,
I realised that I’d never named a famous person as my inspiration. When I’d to talk about my hero in fifth grade, I think I gave a speech on my grandma.
The other thing is, in terms of mimicking who inspires us, we fail to realise that we only see the best side of a public figure. What they choose to portray comes off as an ideal that’s too hard to imitate because it is not the whole picture.
Those were my thoughts, Nima. Good luck, my friend 💕😄
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Same here.. i have never tried to idolize anyone famous.. nor have i tried imitationg anyone 😊 so we both agree 😊
Thank you 😊
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💙💙
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Great poem with a strong message.
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Thanks for your lovely words! I’m grateful you think so 🌹
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❤
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